اللغة الإنجليزية

Sequence 1 — Me, Universal Landmarks and Outstanding Figures Listen and consider

Listen and consider : Describe landmarks using specific information (architectural, cultural, geographical)

🔊 المعلّمة تقرأ لك
A friend comes back from a trip and you ask what the monument was like. He answers: “It was very old and very beautiful.” You still cannot see it. Now read this instead: “It is round, 60.9 metres across, and sixty columns hold it up.” Suddenly the monument has a shape and a size — you can almost walk round it. So what exactly do you have to say about a place before someone who has never been there can see it?
🎓في نهاية هذا الدرس ستكون قادرا على:
  • الاستماع إلى مرشد سياحيّ يصف مَعْلَما، واستخراج المعلومات الدقيقة من كلامه
  • تمييز الأنواع الثلاثة للمعلومة الوصفيّة : المعماريّة والجغرافيّة والثقافيّة
  • ملء بطاقة تعريف معلَم (⁦fact file⁩) انطلاقا من نصّ مسموع
  • التعبير عن المقاييس بالإنجليزيّة : ⁦its diameter is … · it is … metres high⁩
  • وصف معلَم جزائريّ وصفا دقيقا : أين هو ؟ ما شكله ؟ ما مقاييسه ؟ ولماذا يُزار ؟
🔑يفترض هذا الدرس أنّك تتقن:
  • المضارع البسيط لوصف ما هو قائم الآن : ⁦it is · it has · it stands⁩
  • قراءة الأعداد الكبيرة والأعداد العشريّة بالإنجليزيّة
  • الاستماع مرّتين : الفكرة العامّة أوّلا، ثمّ التفاصيل الرقميّة

Before you listen

قبل الاستماع : اقرأ البطاقة والأسئلة، ثمّ اضغط زرّ الاستماع أعلى الصفحة. لا تفتح النصّ إلّا بعد أن تجيب.
1. Look at the fact sheet below. It is the sheet a guide fills in about a monument. — Location · Shape · Base circumference · Diameter · Height · Sustaining columns · Doors 2. Read it again and say which of those seven lines you could see with your eyes, and which ones you would have to measure. 3. A tourist guide is about to take two visitors to a monument. Before you listen, guess: which of those lines will he be able to answer? ⭐ On this page the recording is read aloud by the listening button, at the top. Listen once without opening anything.
The recording
نصّ المسموع. ⛔ لا تفتحه قبل أن تستمع وتجيب.

On a plateau above the coast — Nadia, a tourist guide, with Mr and Mrs Brown Nadia: Good morning. I hope you've spent a good night. Would you like to visit the Mausoleum this morning? Mr Brown: Yes, please. What is the first sight we are going to see? Nadia: The Royal Mauretanian Mausoleum. It stands on a green plateau, and from up there you can see the sea on the horizon. Mrs Brown: Is it a building, like a house? Nadia: No. It is round — a great circle of stone, built in steps, one above the other. And all around it runs a colonnade: sixty columns are set into the wall and sustain the monument. Mr Brown: Sixty! And how big is that circle? Nadia: Its base circumference is one hundred and eighty-five point five metres, and its diameter is sixty point nine metres. Walk once round the monument and you have walked more than one hundred and eighty metres. Mrs Brown: This is just what I expected. Great! Nadia: Below us, on the right, you can see the red roofs of the houses. And open your map: it is the whole wilaya of Tipaza. It has four neighbours — Alger, Blida, Aïn Defla and Chlef. Mr Brown: And after the Mausoleum, where will we stop next? Nadia: At the Roman columns and the ancient arch. Look at the top of the columns: the capitals are carved, and you will find flowers cut in the stone. Mrs Brown: I'm fond of old stones. How do you like it here, after all these tours? Nadia: I'm mad about it. And if you had more days, I would take you south, to the Hoggar. There are cave frescoes there — pictures of animals and hunters, painted on the walls of the caves by the people who lived in them. Mr Brown: Paintings, in the desert? What a pity we only have three days. Nadia: The desert did not use to be a desert, Sir. The Sahara used to be a green land, with large rivers and big lakes full of fish, and large forests. That is why some people say the word “Sahara” does not come from the Arabic Sahra, which means desert, but from a Sanskrit word, Sagara — big sea. Mrs Brown: A big sea in the Sahara. Terrible! We are leaving on Thursday.

First listening

الاستماع الأوّل : أسئلة عامّة.
1. Who are the three speakers, and where are they?
من المتحدّثون الثلاثة ؟ وأين هم ؟

Nadia, a tourist guide, and two visitors, Mr and Mrs Brown. They are on a plateau above the coast, in front of the Royal Mauretanian Mausoleum, in the wilaya of Tipaza.

2. What is the first sight, and what will they see next?
ما هو أوّل معلَم ؟ وماذا سيزورون بعده ؟

First: the Royal Mauretanian Mausoleum. Next: the Roman columns and the ancient arch, with their carved capitals. ⟹ Notice that Mr Brown asks the two questions himself: “What is the first sight?” and “Where will we stop next?” They are the two questions every visitor asks a guide, and a guide answers them with names, never with “a monument” or “an old thing”.

3. Write down every number the guide gives. What does each one measure?
دوّن كلّ عدد ذكره المرشد، وحدّد ما الذي يقيسه.
  1. 60 — the number of sustaining columns set into the wall of the monument.
  2. 185.5 metres — its base circumference: the distance all round the bottom of it.
  3. 60.9 metres — its diameter: the distance straight across it.
  4. 4 — the number of neighbouring wilayas: Alger, Blida, Aïn Defla, Chlef.

Four numbers in a short conversation, and not one of them is decoration. Take them away and the monument becomes “very old and very beautiful” again.

4. Why does the guide say that the desert did not use to be a desert?
لماذا يقول المرشد إنّ الصحراء لم تكن صحراء ؟

Because the Sahara used to be a green land: large rivers, big lakes full of fish, large forests — and people who lived in caves and painted animals and hunters on the walls. And she uses that fact to explain a word: some say “Sahara” does not come from the Arabic Sahra (desert) but from the Sanskrit Sagara, “big sea”. ⟹ Look at what the guide just did. She did not describe the Hoggar with adjectives — she described it with a history and a name. That is the third kind of information, and it is the one tourists remember.

Second listening — three kinds of information

الاستماع الثاني : ثلاثة أنواع من المعلومة.
Sort what the guide said into three kinds: architectural, geographical, cultural
صنّف ما قاله المرشد في ثلاثة أنواع : معماريّ، جغرافيّ، ثقافيّ.
Kind of informationFrom the recordingThe question it answers
Architecturalround · built in steps · a colonnade · sixty sustaining columns · 185.5 metres · 60.9 metresWhat does it look like, and how big is it?
Geographicalon a green plateau · the sea on the horizon · the red roofs below · the wilaya of Tipaza · Alger, Blida, Aïn Defla, ChlefWhere is it, and what is around it?
CulturalRoman columns and their carved capitals · an ancient arch · the cave frescoes of the Hoggar · Sahra and SagaraWho made it, when, and why do we still go and see it?

⭐ Read the third column again. A complete description answers three different questions, and most pupils answer only the first one. The guide moves from one kind to the next without warning you — that is exactly what makes her description feel full.

To describe a landmark with specific information, fill a fact file — then turn it into sentences. Architectural — Shape · Height · Diameter · Base circumference · Sustaining columns · Doors · Material. Geographical — Location · Bordering ocean or sea · Bordering country · Neighbouring regions · Population. Cultural — Who built it · Famous for · Famous valley, bridge, observatory, tree · Why people visit it. ⭐ Then each line becomes one sentence: Its diameter is 60.9 metres. · It stands on a green plateau. · Sixty columns sustain it.
⛔ Three things that spoil a description. — not “It has 60.9 metres.” A measurement takes to be: “Its diameter is 60.9 metres”, or “It is 60.9 metres in diameter.” — not “It is very very big.” If you know the figure, give the figure. An adjective you cannot prove is worth nothing to a visitor. — not “There is a monument in Algeria.” Every landmark has a name, and the name comes first: the Royal Mauretanian Mausoleum.
⛔ خطأ شائع : لا تقل ⁦it has 60.9 metres⁩. المقياس في الإنجليزيّة يُصاغ بـ⁦to be⁩ : ⁦its diameter is 60.9 metres⁩ أو ⁦it is 60.9 metres in diameter⁩.

Now it is your turn

إنتاج : املأ البطاقة أوّلا، ثمّ اكتب، ثمّ افتح النموذج وقارن.
Advertise a monument of your own region

a. Choose a landmark you have really seen: a mosque, a fort, a gate, a bridge, a park, a ruin. b. Fill in this fact sheet. Leave a line empty if you do not know it — do not guess a number. Location … · Shape … · Height … · Doors … · Material … · Built by … · Famous for … c. Now write six to eight lines for a tourist who has never come. Give at least two figures, one geographical detail and one cultural detail. ⛔ Do not write a single measurement that you have not checked. A description with an invented figure is not a description, it is an advertisement.

A model — the same method applied to the monument of the recording
نموذج : المنهجيّة نفسها مطبّقة على المعلَم الذي سمعته.

Write yours first. This model uses only the facts of the recording, put back into the order of the fact file — so that you can see the method, not copy the content.

Model

The Royal Mauretanian Mausoleum stands on a green plateau, in the wilaya of Tipaza. From the monument you can see the sea on the horizon, and the red roofs of the houses below. It is round: a great circle of stone, built in steps. Its base circumference is 185.5 metres and its diameter is 60.9 metres, and sixty columns are set into the wall and sustain it. Not far from it there are Roman columns and an ancient arch, with flowers carved in the capitals. Come and walk once round the Mausoleum: you will have walked more than one hundred and eighty metres, and you will have walked round history.

Check the model against the three kinds: architectural (the shape, the two figures, the sixty columns), geographical (the plateau, the sea, the wilaya, the roofs), cultural (the Roman columns, the arch, the carved capitals). Three kinds, three short paragraphs — and the last sentence is the only one where the writer speaks to the reader.

At the BEM, describing a place belongs to Written expression, and the subject is almost always a situation: a foreign friend is coming to your town, write him a short letter about a monument he must see. Keep three things ready: a name first ; two figures at least, written with “to be” (“its height is…”, “it is … metres long”) ; and one sentence of the three kinds — what it looks like, where it stands, why people come. ⛔ The mistake that costs the most marks: eight lines of adjectives — “big, old, beautiful, wonderful” — without one figure and without the name of the place.
Describing a landmark is not admiring it, it is informing about it. Say its name, then answer three questions that nobody will ask you out loud: what does it look like (shape, size, figures), where does it stand (region, neighbours, what you see from it), and why does it matter (who built it, what it is famous for). Adjectives fade; 60.9 metres stays.

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